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 <h1>I build web things.</h1>
 
 <p>
-  A full stack web developer with an affinity for clean code, workflow optimization, and
-  ruby. I have experiences ranging from html prototyping through designing and executing
-  API architectures.
+  A well-seasoned web developer with an affinity for clean code,
+  workflow optimization, and ruby. I have experiences ranging from
+  HTML prototyping through designing and executing API architectures.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  I have a high value for quality craftsmanship. I want to do great work, with people who
-  also do great work. I love to explore and learn about my world. I enjoy being
-  challenged. I take pleasure in providing creative solutions to specific needs, always
-  keeping the bigger picture in mind.
+  I highly value quality craftsmanship and want to do great work,
+  with people who also do great work. I love to explore and learn
+  about my world. I enjoy being challenged. I take pleasure in
+  providing creative solutions to specific needs, always keeping
+  the bigger picture in mind.
 </p>
 
-
 <h2>Proficiency's</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Well versed in many web development tool chains, my strengths include Ruby, JavaScript,
-  SCSS, SQL, and PHP.
+  Well versed in many web development tool chains, my strengths
+  include Ruby, JavaScript, SCSS, SQL, and PHP.
 </p>
 
-5/5 HTML Prototyping
-5/5 Ruby on Rails
-4/5 Linux Server Administration
-4/5 Front-End Dev Tool chains
-4/5 PHP Development
-4/5 Information Architecture
-3/5 UX Consulting
-5/5 CSS (and SCSS)
-4/5 JavaScript
-5/5 SQL
-5/5 Ruby
-
+<ul>
+  <li>5/5 HTML Prototyping</li>
+  <li>5/5 Ruby on Rails</li>
+  <li>4/5 Linux Server Administration</li>
+  <li>4/5 Front-End Dev Tool chains</li>
+  <li>4/5 PHP Development</li>
+  <li>4/5 Information Architecture</li>
+  <li>3/5 UX Consulting</li>
+  <li>5/5 CSS (and SCSS)</li>
+  <li>4/5 JavaScript</li>
+  <li>5/5 SQL</li>
+  <li>5/5 Ruby</li>
+</ul>