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@@ -9,10 +9,12 @@ tags: paper.js, coffeescript
       %h2 Coffee Paper
 
     %p
-      I need to get more failure with coffee script, but don't personally write a lot of javascript, which is
-      why I never really took the time to learn coffeescript. I decided there would be no better way than to
-      explore some fun library, and found paper.js. This just might rekindle (replace) my povray noodles and
-      get me working in more js.
+      I need to get more familiar with coffee script but don't personally write a lot of javascript. This is
+      why I never really took the time to learn coffeescript.
+    %p
+      I realize there is no better way than to explore some fun library. Then I found paper.js and it just 
+      might rekindle (replace) my povray noodles and get me working in more js.
+    %p
       = link_to 'This gist', 'https://gist.github.com/mnmly/1164446#file-coffee-stained-paper-js'
       helped me get a basic tutorial script working with coffeescript; off to a new thing.